Please bear with my painful rhymes in my dedication to the letter
My K is missing,
I think it’s run away.
I can’t write anything
if I don’t find my K.
I could write about Kansas
or Kramer’s, I suppose
but those are things about which everybody knows.
I could write about Kings or Knights
who Kiss damsels in distress
but my brain seems to be under duress.
I could write about a Kangaroo
who dates a Koala bear
but I’d rather visit Australia first
before I share.
Barb says, “The kiwi and the kakapo
begin to take offense
to visit Aus before NZ
simply makes no sense!”
Perhaps it is Karma that K ran away
for without my K, I have nothing to say.
Apr 13, 2011 @ 07:47:01
Was stuck on K too. So I dusted off some old stuff. Good job!!
Apr 13, 2011 @ 08:30:07
ThanKs!
Apr 13, 2011 @ 08:25:42
kaptivating!
Apr 13, 2011 @ 08:29:44
Kool!
Apr 13, 2011 @ 09:53:26
I didn’t find this the least bit painful to read. Although I would revise one line to improve the rhyme:
I could write about Kangaroos
or Koala bears
but I’d rather visit Australia first
before I share.
I could write about Kangaroos
or a Koala bear
but I’d rather visit Australia first
before I share.
Apr 13, 2011 @ 11:19:17
Thanks for that feedback. I took it one step forward into silliness:
I could write about a Kangaroo
who dates a Koala bear
but I’d rather visit Australia first
before I share.
Apr 13, 2011 @ 11:44:30
Love it! Diversity in relationships.
Apr 13, 2011 @ 11:34:23
I like it the way you original wrote it!
Silliness is so fun!
Sandi
http://www.ahhsome.wordpress.com
Apr 13, 2011 @ 11:53:17
I like both, but I like that I got sillier.
Apr 13, 2011 @ 14:39:25
The kiwi and the kakapo
begin to take offense
to visit Aus before NZ
simply makes no sense!
Apr 13, 2011 @ 14:49:42
LOL! Sorry Barb, I was having trouble thinking of K’s. I’m going to add that into the poem now.
Apr 13, 2011 @ 14:55:14
Oh, fun. Now, I want to play
With words and the missing “K”
Kiwi, Koala, Kanga and Roo
And, yes, even the Kakapoo
Hmmph.
It’s kakapo, NOT kakapoo
Oh, it’s kakapo, not kakapoo
That’s a fine, how-do-you-do
I’m sorry if you took offense
I meant no harm with this nonsense
Thanks, guys! I’ve had fun
And now this rhyming time is done!
Apr 13, 2011 @ 18:41:16
That’s really kute and very kreative! K’s are kind of hard.
Apr 14, 2011 @ 21:20:11
I love the k poem, very klever!!