The woman stands alone in the field arms raised toward the skies. Invisible breezes lift her long hair toward the swift moving clouds in a dance of joy and wonder to the music of the universe. In between clouds the stars peek through, joining the dance with their own mystical movements.
In front of her, a fire blazes, sending sparks into the night sky that then join the ballet of courtship of hundreds of fireflies.
Her long silver-white hair continues to dance, the length and beauty revealing the years of stories she has to share.The woman shows no wrinkles in her face, and yet holds true wisdom in the depths of her dark brown eyes.
“Come my children,” the ageless woman calls. “Come hear my tales. Come share the stories!”
Children of all ages gather round her. Some sit in the cool grass, playing with the summery fronds. Some balance on stumps and stones. They come down paths in the woods surrounding the clearing, never through the trees.
Elderly children, so old that their wrinkles have their own stories to tell, hobble in helped by youth. They are ancient, but the Storyteller is more ancient still.
They come from all around, but avoid entering the woods. They won’t even look in the shadows of the trees for fear of seeing one of the Others. The Others come as well, in silent rustles and hidden shadows, never daring to come out from the safety of the trees.
“What stories will you hear my children?” the Storyteller asks in a sing-song voice that is low as a whisper but as clear as a bell. Nobody strains to hear her voice, not even the children sitting farthest away under the shadows of the trees. These children, the children of the Others, will not enter the field without permission. They know that they are not welcomed by the crowd around the Storyteller. Yet, the call of her stories cannot be ignored.
“Shall I tell you stories of life or of death? Shall I tell you stories of love or of hate? What stories will you hear my children?”
The children in the field call out their favorite tales, hoping the Storyteller will choose one of those ideas. But the Storyteller waits until she hears the distant voice calling from under the shadow of the trees.
“Tell us a story of acceptance,” a hesitant voice cries. The Storyteller catches a glimpse of the speaker as a spark lights up the young child’s eyes.
“Very well,” she speaks. “Acceptance begins in the woods . . . ” The crowd gasps, glancing uncomfortably at the shadows they make every effort to avoid.
“Once upon a time, not so very long ago . . .”

Jul 25, 2011 @ 14:25:46
The hook is in…what’s next.
I hear about the hook at the end of each chapter…or sometimes important scene. It is an important skill…you have it…
Please, may I borrow it? Please?
Jaye
Jul 25, 2011 @ 14:32:47
Well, this time the secret of the hook is that I actually have no clue what is next.
But, seriously, I think a hook is just stopping before you have nothing left to say.
Jul 25, 2011 @ 14:47:39
please…do not kid yourself…it is the most important skill or trait to being published
believe me!
Love you words…it is going to be a sweet feel good story…I need one right now…
Jaye
Jul 25, 2011 @ 14:59:18
Ok you just started a story here as I did a year ago. Don’t be like me and wait a year to continue it. Just write the story one word at a time. As I am doing now. It will begin taking shape in your own mind as each new word emerges. I suspect it will surpass my own very quickly. Even not it is a story that needs to be told…
Jul 25, 2011 @ 15:54:26
I don’t know if I’ve started a story or if this is a snippet of story that has been trying to come out for a while. Only time will tell.
Jul 25, 2011 @ 15:37:18
I do hope you’re going to continue this!
~FringeGirl
Jul 25, 2011 @ 15:53:36
In some for or another.
Jul 25, 2011 @ 15:52:08
Brilliant, Lisa! This made me cry! I totally, totally love it–thank you!
Jul 25, 2011 @ 15:53:21
Thank you Kathy. It’s nice to know I’ve touched someone.
Jul 25, 2011 @ 16:09:11
Lisa, I was so badly hoping this was a novel… like I could read another million pages of this. Perfect
Jul 25, 2011 @ 17:14:03
I’m not sure what this is as of this moment Tori. Only time will tell.
Jul 25, 2011 @ 16:11:29
soooooooo, why are we not all building this story?….not so very long ago when time as I experience it in the hidden realm moved at a different pace, the woods held secrets you can’t imagine…..though within your myth and legend you believe you know a truth; harken to me now……
Jul 25, 2011 @ 17:13:42
I LOVE the idea of us all building this story. It goes along with a thought percolating through my brain right now, that I’m not sure I can express. Write on Barbarann . . . tell me your part of this story.
Jul 25, 2011 @ 18:37:45
….not so very long ago that I cannot recall, I lived for quite some time among the Others, deep in woods so dark and drear that daylight knew no part of me. I sampled what it was to live the Life of Other. Bitter to my tongue I found the shunning and for reasons I could hardly understand….my age, my gender and my very wisdom held as too much difference held me hid. And then, like you, I crept out into sunlight where I was radiant, filled with much to share….eons of the voices held inside. Gather close and build my story, stand by me and tell the story of the world, for it is yours and mine and all the chapters are our very own….
Jul 25, 2011 @ 18:45:40
You are giving me chills. Beautiful. Perhaps you are the Storyteller.
Jul 25, 2011 @ 19:13:00
Each of us, if not the Storyteller, shares the tale and then somehow we know the story full, even if we each hold just a part. And when we brave it up and start our sharing, lo, we find we can complete each other’s sentences. And then we tell the story of the world. We drop our masks, resist the shrilling, speak our words and know each other in the telling. And fill the woods with sunlight fair. You in me and I in you, we sing the music of the spheres…we are each other, our differences only in degree and once we’re free of all our masking, recognition gifts us with….acceptance.
Jul 25, 2011 @ 19:21:39
Alright I am not quite sure why I have not journeyed over to your blog yet! Your comments fill me with a sense or rightness that goes well beyond conscious thought. You truly a master of words. Between you and Lisa I might actually learn how to manipulate language as I aspire to. I need to rectify my erro right away and take a peek your way!
Jul 25, 2011 @ 20:06:21
Taochild, while the thoughts I share are quite my own, and arranging words just happen , without much thought to how, you are too kind to make me master. We dance and sing together til we learn the words and steps! It’ s only then we find ourselves entwined in true content. The trick is all about trust enough to forfeit fear. Risk to joy. But I am merely spring boarding off Lisa’s initial thiniking and saw an obvious chance for dialogue in a lovely format. I feared I was taking too much liberty and found myself grateful to Lisa for her invitation.
Jul 25, 2011 @ 20:20:27
True mastery may be recognizing when we are actually the servant of our tools. Lisa is my sister and she has connected me to some amazing people. Mostly through comments on her amazing writing. It is always a pleasure to find a new connection…
Jul 25, 2011 @ 20:51:39
You are blessed to have such a gifted sister. I have a gifted Lisa of my own who is my daughter.
Jul 25, 2011 @ 21:30:23
You are both making me blush. I wish I could believe in the talent you both perceive in me, but I don’t trust my own stories or my own words.
Jul 25, 2011 @ 21:56:45
If in this way you cheat yourself, you narrow your world and perhaps also tell us we can’t believe our eyes. Give yourself permission if only for a day, to Read yourself aloud and hear the wonder of you as we do. And trust the gift that is yours, different from mine. Perhaps I have a freedom you don’t. I can recognize no skill in myself, I am that new. That means I can only see myself as who you say I am. What you say I have. There we are again, seeing who we are in each other. Complex. Brave. Fragile even while we are strong. But striving to be always more.
Jul 26, 2011 @ 09:40:01
I gave myself permission, and read myself out loud. And (besides discovering a typo LOL) I can hear the power of these words. I am sensing the power of story as it is making its way through me. I have to let go of needing to know where this is heading and just trust the flow of words. Thank you Barbarann.
Jul 25, 2011 @ 22:21:08
Wonderful tale, Lisa ~ acceptance starts a tidal wave of love and compassion.
Jul 26, 2011 @ 03:06:05
What a fabulous piece! You are so talented! I love the repetition of the ‘what stories’ & as for the ending – wow!
This week’s 100WCGU can be found here http://bit.ly/nIZ4Lp
Jul 26, 2011 @ 08:22:07
Thanks so much Julia. This week’s challenge looks like an excellent one. (although slightly depressing one given the motivation).
Jul 26, 2011 @ 13:23:59
bravo. Acceptance begins with self. First and last and sustained. That’s the big word. if I am never again blessed to write another word, I would know contentment if I could be certain you recognize and salute the true writer you are. Will all your work be fabulous? No, for, uppermost, you are a seeker. Forgive your glitches and move forward. Lisa, oh my dear, you’re not just good. You habitually reach the heights of spectacular. Rest in it. Hell, roll in it!get it all over yourself! Enjoy the ride and take us with you! Because, see ,we trust you!
Jul 26, 2011 @ 15:13:23
more please, I’m hooked
Jul 26, 2011 @ 15:46:02
I’ll try. Give it time.