Variations on a Challenge (100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups)

The challenge:

“Now for this week, I’m pinching (with permission!) an idea from my dear friend Jenny Matlock.  You may not be old enough to know this rhyme:

Remember remember the fifth of November
Gunpowder, treason and plot.
I see no reason why gunpowder, treason
Should ever be forgot…

Now it has a rhythm to it – yes? Your challenge this week is to write something with the same rhythm using only 21 words that include ‘ …in winter we shiver…‘ Easy!”

Once I started the challenge, I couldn’t stop, so here are three variations:

Version I: Seasonal Silliness

Whatever the weather in winter we shiver
Whenever the wind does blow
‘Tis the season, surpassing reason
Making men from snow.

Photo by Steve Kramer

Version II: Celebrating the Season

In winter we shiver, limbs all a-quiver
Whenever winds do blow
Still many a reason, a smiling season;
Stupendous sparkly snow.

Version III: Season of Doom

Come hither children, in winter we shiver
as death creeps ever in.
Play, play, forever; undefeatable never
for seasons always win.

Be sure to read all the other entries.

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45 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. annahalford (@anhalf)
    Nov 01, 2011 @ 07:55:10

    Well done; another clever series of posts; I particularly like the alliteration in your second one.

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  2. Sally-Jayne
    Nov 01, 2011 @ 08:29:06

    Well done Lisa. I really enjoyed all of these, but the 3rd one was my favourite.

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  3. Monica
    Nov 01, 2011 @ 08:57:18

    I think you did awesome on this challenge. my favorite is a tie between #1 & #3

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  4. Crowing Crone Joss
    Nov 01, 2011 @ 10:54:35

    most awesome shivers!!

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  5. Midlife Singlemum
    Nov 01, 2011 @ 11:26:53

    These are great – I particulalry like the ghostly one at the end. It evoked a whole story in my mind of children playing as though invincible and each year the winter blows in to remind them that they to are mortal and growing older towards death. Ooooooh, shivers down my spine!

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  6. thelifeofjamie
    Nov 01, 2011 @ 12:05:50

    I do not envy you having snow already! But great poem!

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  7. gsussex
    Nov 01, 2011 @ 16:43:38

    Great posts! Very well done, enjoyed!

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  8. Taochild
    Nov 01, 2011 @ 16:52:08

    Always a pleasure to be in the vicinity when you create art. I can feel the veritable waves of creatitude (I don’t care if that is not a word!)!

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  9. Aurora, HSP
    Nov 01, 2011 @ 16:56:12

    This is so good! Glad to be here for your “shivers!” Thanks for sharing your vignettes (coincidentally, I just posted 3 vignettes prompted from elsewhere but am for sure going to try yours now). Appreciate your always inspiring creativity in motion :)

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  10. Robin Hawke
    Nov 01, 2011 @ 17:04:58

    I couldn’t choose…all wonderful, Robin

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  12. Kathryn McCullough
    Nov 01, 2011 @ 20:09:33

    BRRRRRRR–can’t believe all that snow. I’m shivering and quivering just thinking about it.
    Kathy

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  13. winsomebella
    Nov 01, 2011 @ 23:29:24

    All good but my favorite is the second!

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  14. Sparks In Shadow
    Nov 02, 2011 @ 01:33:03

    I have such a headache from trying to write just one! All three of yours show such skill. It was a pleasure to read and re-read them.

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  15. Alison Green
    Nov 02, 2011 @ 04:33:58

    Love the shivers and quivers. A delightful series. I can almost feel the minds going dum, dum dum di dum as the rhythm overtakes them.

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  16. aprimaryteacherslife
    Nov 02, 2011 @ 16:26:59

    I’ll find doing 1 hard. 3 is excellent.

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  17. wcdameron
    Nov 03, 2011 @ 20:46:27

    I have to say I really like the third one. Dark, but enjoyable!

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  18. gillsrandomramblings
    Nov 03, 2011 @ 21:11:52

    Love the stupendously sparkling snow in your smiley season. Great variety between the three

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  20. bubbleboo
    Nov 04, 2011 @ 11:53:43

    Wow, another one who was obviously far more inspired than I! They’re all really good :)

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  21. Dughall McCormick (@dughall)
    Nov 04, 2011 @ 21:02:13

    I am so impressed! You managed three! Great work and great writing!

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  22. Joanna Burns
    Nov 05, 2011 @ 07:20:37

    You worked hard there!!! Three of em’!! And all three are rather quite good too.

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  23. jfb57
    Nov 05, 2011 @ 13:09:52

    Oooo! I love them all! You clever lady. you obviously got the rhythm & you were then off. Thank you so much for giving up the time to this silliness! I really do appreciate it!

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  24. Mrs TeePot
    Nov 05, 2011 @ 13:11:23

    Fabulous! The last one is very sad though, really well written though!

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