This weeks 100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups asks us to include …. the line was drawn ….. I have combined that with a little personal journey that I am on, as well as a foray into poetry (as I sometimes do). For those of you only interested in the quick read I offer the poem/challenge first, but am following it up with an explanation for anyone who wants to know more.
Yesterday I Began a Journey
Yesterday I began a journey
where the line was drawn between
who I am and who I want to be.My butterfly soul
danced a dance of new beginnings
around the strength found in the turtle and the moonLessons from people connected to the earth
tightened the bond between
mother and daughter
butterfly and turtle
creativity and hope.Yesterday I began a journey
which will involve the beating
of my heart drum
and the sound of thunder
dancing over the waves.Yesterday I began a journey
with laughter, adventure, love and joy.
Today, the journey continues in words.Yesterday I began a journey.
The Explanation
Yesterday Sarah and I went on a spontaneous Girls’ Day adventure with my new friend (and I believe spiritual mentor) Terry to Sioux Falls, South Dakota.
Part of the adventure involved Sarah’s experiencing her first pedicure after watching me get one. It was a silly, fun, mother/daughter bonding experience.
After our feet were fabulous, we went to downtown Sioux Falls to eat lunch. We ended up at Chedd’s, a place for gourmet grilled cheese. Then (once we were able to put real shoes back on) we wandered through some of the fabulous stores on Phillips Street. The first place we wandered into was The Prairie Star Gallery, which has the most beautiful, spiritual and amazing collections of indigenous art I’ve ever seen. The owner shared stories with us of her journey as well as the meaning behind some artifacts. I played and heard the song of a drum so deep and beautiful it still resonates in chest. She told us about the legends of turtles, who represent (in some traditions) women and birth and the moon . Every turtle shell has 13 sections, which represent the 13 moons of the year. Along the edge of their shell are 28 segments, the time between each moon. Women would use turtle shells to keep track of their menstrual cycles.
I ended up buying a gorgeous children’s book because of the draw of this legend.
As I was thinking about turtles, and the journey, and indigenous legends and everything else, I kept pondering my recent butterfly revelations. I did a little web research and found this lovely legend:
An Indian Butterfly Legend
If anyone desires a wish to come true they must
capture a butterfly and whisper that wish to it.Since they make no sound, they can’t tell the wish
to anyone but the Great Spirit.So by making the wish and releasing the butterfly
it will be taken to the heavens and be granted.Author Unknown
All of these images and ideas are merging together into possibilities for me. Right now my mind is dancing with possibilities like:
- an art project which will join these powerful images
- a theatre production that shares some legends, all surrounding the shell of a turtle
- perhaps a puppet play
- . . .
So you see, yesterday I really began a journey into possibility, spirituality and hope.








Jul 24, 2012 @ 15:25:32
How lovely. The poem on its on is beautiful but conveys your own personal meaning with your description of why you wrote it.
Jul 24, 2012 @ 16:32:49
Thanks for your kind words, Sally.
Jul 24, 2012 @ 15:35:37
I enjoyed reading all of this…from the poem to the fun day with your daughter and the info. About the turtle book ( am going to get a copy to read with my class next term) and the sweet butterfly legend.
It sounds like your journey will be one full of exploration…I look forward to reading about some of the roads you travel. X
Jul 24, 2012 @ 16:27:56
Thanks Anna. I look forward to the journey and hope it is one worth writing about.
Jul 24, 2012 @ 17:31:16
Sweet. I met Joseph Bruchac years ago at the National Storytelling event in Tenn. What an amazing teller!! I’ll look this book up.
and a place for just grilled cheese? yum!!
Jul 24, 2012 @ 17:37:48
I love the musicality of your poem, Lisa. Plus, the 20 mother-daughter toes are beautifully colorful. Looks like you had a terrific visit–and grilled cheese to top it all off. Yummy! Can’t wait to see you in a couple of weeks!
Hugs,
Kathy
Jul 25, 2012 @ 16:11:02
I’m flattered on all levels, Kathy. Counting the days now!
Jul 24, 2012 @ 18:35:24
Such a lovely journey to be on. Bon voyage!
Jul 25, 2012 @ 16:10:23
Thanks so much!
Jul 25, 2012 @ 11:09:29
I love the poem and the happenings that wove it.
Jul 25, 2012 @ 16:08:44
Thanks Andra. It was a delightful day.
Jul 25, 2012 @ 11:42:30
even before I read your explanation, the essence of your day with your daughter came through, heavy plodding, grounded turtle and light, breezy, whimsy butterfly are kindred souls that ground and lift us…the ‘roots and wings’ poem comes to mind. Lovely, just lovely! I hope you and your daughter (and other children?) enjoy many such moments in your journeys together.
Jul 25, 2012 @ 16:08:26
Thank you. I am glad you were able to get the essence from my poem. Sadly, no other children, but it makes my journey with my daughter all the more special.
Jul 26, 2012 @ 05:10:44
This was absoluetly beautiful. Just lovely. This reminds me of your last piece, which I think was about new beginnings and exlporing new horizons.
Jul 26, 2012 @ 13:19:11
I’m definitely following a theme lately. Thanks for your kind words.
Jul 27, 2012 @ 05:44:43
My butterfly soul … lovely! You and Sarah are so cute, nothing like mother daughter bonding especially over toes
Jul 27, 2012 @ 10:08:47
It was fun. I just wish there were fewer battles between the days of bonding. This has been a difficult week.
Jul 29, 2012 @ 11:38:49
This is such a lovely post, you day with your daughter sounds perfect. I’m going to order the book for my granddaughter!
Jul 29, 2012 @ 19:03:49
It was a wonderful day. The book is beautiful, especially the illustrations. The poetry is powerful.
Jul 29, 2012 @ 15:31:11
I really like how this flows with the ebb of life itself. Bright, happy and wonderful.
Nicely done!
Jul 29, 2012 @ 19:02:59
Thank you. That is a lovely comment.
Jul 31, 2012 @ 22:50:20
You had me at ‘gourmet grilled cheese.’
Aug 01, 2012 @ 10:10:15
I know. Seriously. Gourmet grilled cheese!