“It’s Not My Fault” (100 Word Challenge)

This week, Julia gave the same challenge to both children and adults. She has a magnificent program going where schools all over England (and the world) have students posting 100 Word Challenges, and people can read and respond. By giving us both the same challenge, she is hoping to get more adults responding and have some young people come over to look at ours.  So, I decided to take this weeks challenge phrase “it’s not my fault” from a young perspective. Enjoy! Then take a peak at other entries, by young and old alike.

 

“It’s not my fault,” I heard Johnny say
“Mom won’t let me come out to play.
I didn’t do anything wrong, I swear!
I didn’t mean to destroy Sarah’s teddy bear.
Can I help it if my rooms a mess?
I have better things to do with my time I guess.
Mom’s so mean! She’s  no fun!
She forgets what it feels like to run
as quickly as you can and slide across the floor . . .
Is it my fault I broke the door?
It’s all her fault, I cannot play
she won’t let me out today. ”

 

29 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. bornstoryteller
    Feb 10, 2012 @ 07:46:08

    Very cute. I needed a smile this morning.

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  2. Kathryn McCullough
    Feb 10, 2012 @ 08:10:15

    I love it, Lisa. Kind of feel sorry for the poor kid!
    Hugs,
    Kathy

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  3. brinkofbedlam
    Feb 10, 2012 @ 10:07:10

    Sounds like my kids, all day long, lol! Cute poem! :O) @Chaoskay

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  4. brinkofbedlam
    Feb 10, 2012 @ 10:07:43

    Not that I don’t let them out, just the destruction bit! (me again)

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  5. Tori Nelson
    Feb 10, 2012 @ 10:57:24

    Love this. I remember getting grounded for wrecking my mom’s car… a car I wasn’t allowed to drive in the first place. At 15, I believed she was totally wrong and told her as much. “You ruin everythinggggg!” is what I shouted, unsure of why anyone would punish little old me 🙂

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  6. Sally-Jayne
    Feb 10, 2012 @ 11:45:56

    Lol – sounds like your average kid…. Nothing is ever their fault!!

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  7. Judee
    Feb 10, 2012 @ 12:46:52

    Poor kid, lol! Nice capture of the kid’s voice.

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  9. rogerdengle
    Feb 11, 2012 @ 10:17:30

    Certainly sounds like my children. (and my wife wonders why the house is always such a wreck…) Good job Lisa!

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  10. ifiwerebraveblog
    Feb 11, 2012 @ 10:45:09

    Love that!

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  11. DancingInTheRain
    Feb 11, 2012 @ 10:47:10

    It’s never their fault at that age, is it? He’ll learn….actions……consequences…. Cute.

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  12. GoofyJ
    Feb 12, 2012 @ 23:56:45

    so true to children’s nature and a fun read – excellently written!

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  13. Writing from the Edge
    Feb 13, 2012 @ 13:20:48

    Lovely poem, and really captures the spirit of the cartoon picture below it! Oooh – I can just hear that grumpy little voice!

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  14. Kate Kresse
    Feb 14, 2012 @ 00:36:33

    loved it! love the rhyming, the meter, and the story. it reminded my of a dr. seuss story1

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  15. annahalford (@anhalf)
    Feb 18, 2012 @ 12:01:05

    great- I had some of my class write similar ones to this; if they came up with all these excuses I think I would forgive them anything!

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