This week, Julia gave the same challenge to both children and adults. She has a magnificent program going where schools all over England (and the world) have students posting 100 Word Challenges, and people can read and respond. By giving us both the same challenge, she is hoping to get more adults responding and have some young people come over to look at ours. So, I decided to take this weeks challenge phrase “it’s not my fault” from a young perspective. Enjoy! Then take a peak at other entries, by young and old alike.
“It’s not my fault,” I heard Johnny say
“Mom won’t let me come out to play.
I didn’t do anything wrong, I swear!
I didn’t mean to destroy Sarah’s teddy bear.
Can I help it if my rooms a mess?
I have better things to do with my time I guess.
Mom’s so mean! She’s no fun!
She forgets what it feels like to run
as quickly as you can and slide across the floor . . .
Is it my fault I broke the door?
It’s all her fault, I cannot play
she won’t let me out today. ”
bornstoryteller
Feb 10, 2012 @ 07:46:08
Very cute. I needed a smile this morning.
Lisa Wields Words
Feb 10, 2012 @ 07:48:02
I’m glad I could help.
Kathryn McCullough
Feb 10, 2012 @ 08:10:15
I love it, Lisa. Kind of feel sorry for the poor kid!
Hugs,
Kathy
Lisa Wields Words
Feb 10, 2012 @ 08:20:16
LOL, but, technically, it is his own fault. 😉
brinkofbedlam
Feb 10, 2012 @ 10:07:10
Sounds like my kids, all day long, lol! Cute poem! :O) @Chaoskay
Lisa Wields Words
Feb 10, 2012 @ 15:48:42
I think it sounds like a lot of kids.
brinkofbedlam
Feb 10, 2012 @ 10:07:43
Not that I don’t let them out, just the destruction bit! (me again)
Lisa Wields Words
Feb 10, 2012 @ 15:49:03
Johnny had done so much, I think he had to get punished. 😉
Tori Nelson
Feb 10, 2012 @ 10:57:24
Love this. I remember getting grounded for wrecking my mom’s car… a car I wasn’t allowed to drive in the first place. At 15, I believed she was totally wrong and told her as much. “You ruin everythinggggg!” is what I shouted, unsure of why anyone would punish little old me 🙂
Lisa Wields Words
Feb 10, 2012 @ 15:48:24
LOL Tori, you naughty child.
Sally-Jayne
Feb 10, 2012 @ 11:45:56
Lol – sounds like your average kid…. Nothing is ever their fault!!
Lisa Wields Words
Feb 10, 2012 @ 15:48:10
Definitely sounds like Sarah. “I didn’t mean too.” “It’s not my fault.”
Judee
Feb 10, 2012 @ 12:46:52
Poor kid, lol! Nice capture of the kid’s voice.
Lisa Wields Words
Feb 10, 2012 @ 15:47:33
Thanks Judee.
rogerdengle
Feb 11, 2012 @ 10:17:30
Certainly sounds like my children. (and my wife wonders why the house is always such a wreck…) Good job Lisa!
Lisa Wields Words
Feb 11, 2012 @ 16:33:34
Sometimes the mess is my fault, but usually it is either my daughter’s or my husband’s. Thanks for reading, Roger.
ifiwerebraveblog
Feb 11, 2012 @ 10:45:09
Love that!
Lisa Wields Words
Feb 11, 2012 @ 11:22:06
Thanks.
DancingInTheRain
Feb 11, 2012 @ 10:47:10
It’s never their fault at that age, is it? He’ll learn….actions……consequences…. Cute.
Lisa Wields Words
Feb 11, 2012 @ 11:21:53
Thanks for reading.
GoofyJ
Feb 12, 2012 @ 23:56:45
so true to children’s nature and a fun read – excellently written!
Lisa Wields Words
Feb 13, 2012 @ 07:32:19
Thank you so much.
Writing from the Edge
Feb 13, 2012 @ 13:20:48
Lovely poem, and really captures the spirit of the cartoon picture below it! Oooh – I can just hear that grumpy little voice!
Lisa Wields Words
Feb 13, 2012 @ 13:41:39
That’s a great compliment. Thank you.
Kate Kresse
Feb 14, 2012 @ 00:36:33
loved it! love the rhyming, the meter, and the story. it reminded my of a dr. seuss story1
Lisa Wields Words
Feb 14, 2012 @ 07:28:38
Thank you. Lovely compliment. Who wouldn’t want to reflect Dr. Seuss?
annahalford (@anhalf)
Feb 18, 2012 @ 12:01:05
great- I had some of my class write similar ones to this; if they came up with all these excuses I think I would forgive them anything!
Lisa Wields Words
Feb 18, 2012 @ 14:36:06
I’m sure if they are anything like my daughter, excuses come easily . . . not good excuses but excuses nonetheless.